Sunday, December 5, 2010

the Song

understanding the Song
in truth
The ultimate freedom;

perfect and absolute understanding

Serenity opens the door,
laughter a shortcut.

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The OED word of the day for the erasure poem |commentary is 'enlightenment.'


Sadami said...

Dear Susan,
Lovely, your landscape is so gorgeous. I totally agree with your today's English haiku. Your haiku remineds me of a word, "song" in Japanese, which can mean "waka, tanka and haiku."
Kind regards, Sadami

alkiart said...

As always, Sadami, you add an interesting note. Thanks!